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Sep. 6th, 2007

Escape Artist Chapter 5 The Show Goes on Tour

Title: Escape Artist
Chaper: 5 The Show Goes on Tour
Story Summary: Something has gone terribly wrong in Lily's life. Because she can't bring herself to face it or even think about it in her own mind, she leaves the one place that reminds her of her failure most, college. Follow Lily in her struggle to find her own way in the world. Can she make something of herself without college or any social contacts, or has Lily just made the biggest mistake of her life?
Word Count: 2,584
Warnings: None
Added Thoughts: Sorry it took me so long to add a chapter, but you know moving into school. Catching up with people and what not go in the way. I still haven't written anything past chapter nine, but I feel like I have quite a bit of inspiration for it. As far as my feelings on this chapter go, chapter four is still by far my favorite chapter in terms of dialouge and character, but I think this one is pretty fun too.

Aug. 26th, 2007

Escape Artist Chapter 4Lovely Assistant Comes to the Rescue?

Title: Escape Artist
Chaper: 4 The Lovely Assistant Comes to the Rescue?
Story Summary:  Something has gone terribly wrong in Lily's life.  Because she can't bring herself to face it or even think about it in her own mind, she leaves the one place that reminds her of her failure most, college.  Follow Lily in her struggle to find her own way in the world.  Can she make something of herself without college or any social contacts, or has Lily just made the biggest mistake of her life?
Word Count: 4,516
Warnings: None
Added Thoughts: Sorry it took me so long to add a chapter.  I just got caught up with some other projects and thoughts.  I'll try to be quicker with the postage.  Other than that I'd like to at that while I know that it seems like a longer chapter, this one kind of funny and it has a lot of good personality in it.  Funny how happy parts of it can turn out.  I'll also note that I think I've found my inspiration for this one again so I'm going to be writing more to it soon anyhow.  Seems thinking about the real world reminds me of why I started writing this one in the first place.  I'm thinking that Lily is back woot.


Aug. 15th, 2007

Escape Artist Chapter 3 The Walls Constrict

Title: Escape Artist
Chaper: 3 The Walls Constrict
Story Summary:  Something has gone terribly wrong in Lily's life.  Because she can't bring herself to face it or even think about it in her own mind, she leaves the one place that reminds her of her failure most, college.  Follow Lily in her struggle to find her own way in the world.  Can she make something of herself without college or any social contacts, or has Lily just made the biggest mistake of her life?
Word Count: 2,662
Warnings: None
Added Thoughts:  I would love any kind of comments people could give me, some things I'm looking for include: 1.) How is the emotional energy in this part?  2.) Are the characters realistic?  3.) Too much Too little, not enough? 

Aug. 11th, 2007

Escape Artist Chapter 2 Out of the Mountains and Into the Labyrinth

Title: Escape Artist
Chaper: 2 Out of the Mountains and Into the Labyrinth
Story Summary:  Something has gone terribly wrong in Lily's life.  Because she can't bring herself to face it or even think about it in her own mind, she leaves the one place that reminds her of her failure most, college.  Follow Lily in her struggle to find her own way in the world.  Can she make something of herself without college or any social contacts, or has Lily just made the biggest mistake of her life?
Word Count: 4,369
Warnings: None
Added Thoughts:  I would love any kind of comments people could give me, some things I'm looking for include: 1.) What do you think of the mom and dad?  2.) What do you think of the conversation going on, natural, forced, confused by what else is going on?  3.) Does the chapter move along or am I lingering to much into a moment?  

Aug. 10th, 2007

Escape Artist Chapter1 Death Desiring Departure

Ok, so this is me in the process of writing a novel.  I've got the first eight chapters done, but I'll only post one at a time.  I would really love comments or thoughts on the works.  If you miss a chapter or want to go back and look at it later the tag on this with be the story title Escape Artist.  Ok, thanks for your time and here we go ^.^

Title: Escape Artist
Chaper: 1 Death Desiring Departure
Story Summary:  Something has gone terribly wrong in Lily's life.  Because she can't bring herself to face it or even think about it in her own mind, she leaves the one place that reminds her of her failure most, college.  Follow Lily in her struggle to find her own way in the world.  Can she make something of herself without college or any social contacts, or has Lily just made the biggest mistake of her life?
Word Count: 3,964
Warnings: None
Added Thoughts:  I would love any kind of comments people could give me, some things I'm looking for include: 1.) Whether the transitions are choppy or smooth and how to improve them.  2.) Are the use of song names and lyrics helpful or distracting.  3.) From this chapter would you want to read the next to see what happened next?  4.) Is there anything that takes you out of the story, akward wording or things that leave too many open questions?